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AWF Unlimited page 5 by rubendevela AWF Unlimited page 5 by rubendevela
Page 1 [link]
Page 2 [link]
Page 3 [link]
Page 4 [link]
Page 5 [:painter:]

Story by Frank Herbert, adapted by me for fan and portfolio purposes.

Do you think this page is overdrawn? There's a lot of information being tossed around in the background, maybe too much.

Leo Prim is partly inspired by Mohinder Suresh and Touya Akira's (lack of) facial expressions. So according to fangirl logic, his ideal art director rival would be a brain-eating serial killer possessed by a boardgame-playing ghost.

The space armor depicted here is identical to my concept for the Starship Troopers armor :)
They have Shirow hands but helmets that say "Chaaaahge! Foh the Emprerah!"
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Eriisu-April Apr 17, 2010
I think that the page looks fine. A couple dialog-heavy pages isnt a bad thing at all, this helped with the story set-up. Ending it with armored suits in the corner definitely grabs some curiosity. :D If you ever added another page, I would definitely keep reading.
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:iconrubendevela:
Thanks! I'll keep that in mind if I revisit this :)
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:iconmetalformer:
metalformer Oct 18, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm liking it thus far. I think the information brought is OK and enough to inform you about the back story.
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:iconbatangbatugan:
Casting call for Johnny Delgado as Andre! :XD:
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:icongirlwithparasol:
haha ang galing! parang naka-barong si andre
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:iconrubendevela:
He is! To me, there's something about non-intimidating, ineffective leadership that needs to wear a barong :P
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:iconpockypuck:
Wow, if I had that man's looks I'd go a-seducin' too. :3

Subtler and subtler layers. Ooh, mecha--what're they for?
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:iconrubendevela:
[GONE SEDUCIN']

Pardon the last panel, I'll add a transition between it and the previous to clarify what's going on :)
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:iconpockypuck:
(Har, now I need a sign like that. XD)

:D Is cool, I figured there was an explanation coming.
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:iconbensen-daniel:
I actually like this one best. I'm a big fan of details in the background.
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