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AWF Unlimited page 5by ~rubendevela

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Story by Frank Herbert, adapted by me for fan and portfolio purposes.

Do you think this page is overdrawn? There's a lot of information being tossed around in the background, maybe too much.

Leo Prim is partly inspired by Mohinder Suresh and Touya Akira's (lack of) facial expressions. So according to fangirl logic, his ideal art director rival would be a brain-eating serial killer possessed by a boardgame-playing ghost.

The space armor depicted here is identical to my concept for the Starship Troopers armor

They have Shirow hands but helmets that say "Chaaaahge! Foh the Emprerah!"

!Eriisu-April Apr 17, 2010

I think that the page looks fine. A couple dialog-heavy pages isnt a bad thing at all, this helped with the story set-up. Ending it with armored suits in the corner definitely grabs some curiosity.

If you ever added another page, I would definitely keep reading.