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AWF Unlimited page 5 by rubendevela AWF Unlimited page 5 by rubendevela
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Story by Frank Herbert, adapted by me for fan and portfolio purposes.

Do you think this page is overdrawn? There's a lot of information being tossed around in the background, maybe too much.

Leo Prim is partly inspired by Mohinder Suresh and Touya Akira's (lack of) facial expressions. So according to fangirl logic, his ideal art director rival would be a brain-eating serial killer possessed by a boardgame-playing ghost.

The space armor depicted here is identical to my concept for the Starship Troopers armor :)
They have Shirow hands but helmets that say "Chaaaahge! Foh the Emprerah!"
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Eriisu-April Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2010
I think that the page looks fine. A couple dialog-heavy pages isnt a bad thing at all, this helped with the story set-up. Ending it with armored suits in the corner definitely grabs some curiosity. :D If you ever added another page, I would definitely keep reading.
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rubendevela Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010
Thanks! I'll keep that in mind if I revisit this :)
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metalformer Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm liking it thus far. I think the information brought is OK and enough to inform you about the back story.
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batangbatugan Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
Casting call for Johnny Delgado as Andre! :XD:
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girlwithparasol Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
haha ang galing! parang naka-barong si andre
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rubendevela Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
He is! To me, there's something about non-intimidating, ineffective leadership that needs to wear a barong :P
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PockyPuck Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
Wow, if I had that man's looks I'd go a-seducin' too. :3

Subtler and subtler layers. Ooh, mecha--what're they for?
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rubendevela Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2007
[GONE SEDUCIN']

Pardon the last panel, I'll add a transition between it and the previous to clarify what's going on :)
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PockyPuck Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2007
(Har, now I need a sign like that. XD)

:D Is cool, I figured there was an explanation coming.
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bensen-daniel Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
I actually like this one best. I'm a big fan of details in the background.
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Twinsnake-Coatl Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
Personally, I think you're giving just enough (and much needed) info on the characters.
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kitsuneko Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Leo's got Mohinder's fashion sense alright. What the heck is he wearing??
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rubendevela Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
I dunno, but I guess he shops where Peter Chung's people go to for their weird clothes :P
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Drunkenvalley Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I have to say, I'm curious what the story's all about, but it's nice so far. :D
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Letdragon Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2007
Dang, I just love the expressions and various views
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